coporalbiscuits's Reviews

[The Dangers of Music]

This aint Nathaniel Milburn!

Seriously? Camp North? wtf? Why bother putting the name of another cartoon on your animation. Judging by your style, you are not nathaniel milburn so...explain?

Insanimation responds:

CampNorth isn't an animation, it's a community website for artists and animators. I used to be a member, before it shut down.

[Kill "The Man"]

To be honest...

I really do not understand the pleasure in mercilessly slaughtering fat men. My range of pleaures does not include watching bitmaps exploding into violent bursts of gore, and I do not understand why someone would take time to create something as hyper-violent as this. The animation needed a little work, but a bit of practice should help (and try not to keep your favorite color red, please). I would greatly enjoy watching an animation that uses your growing talent on something other than violence.

Until then, a 2/10

[dick cover]

whoa guys what is wrong with you?

the quality of this flash movie is exceedingly poor. the most complex animation it gets into is basically a bunch of motion square motion tweens flying past. most of the animation was choppy, especially at the part with the leaf flying past. learn to use the tools in flash a little bit better before you submit stuff to newgrounds. Especially the fill tool, which is extremely useful. otherwise, continue to work on artistic parts in it, like changing the grass so its not just a big green square...etc. good luck.

[Plazma Burst: FTP]

awesome game!

probably the best game i have ever played on newgrounds. The graphics and shooting was amazing. the only problem with it was that it ran slow at times. Besides that, there is not much else to say. this game has been horribly underrated by newgrounds.

[Motion Maze]

somehow, i don't get it...

basically, if you move the box within an inch of the moving object, you lose. That glitch makes this game so pointless. I would suggest putting in a background so that it would be a little it more appealing. Please fix the glitches! also, phsycofrog is wrong that it is an AI. I am guessing it is just a motion tween moving around the stage with a collision detector. my advice is to put a lot more work into your games before you submit them.

[Platformer Tech Demo 2]

could use some work

I think that the addition of in-game instructions would be useful. Also, i think you should make the backgrounds and graphics a little more attractive, and you could probably put signs in that show you which way to go. Very good choice in music though.

[DJ M21 - Freedom]

good

I especially liked the parts where there was a bit of a call and response going on between the base and the high synth. My advice to you is to make it a little less repetitive, because most of the song was the same thing (or atleast sounded that way).
One thing i did not much like about it was the very loud base hits throughout the song that sounded a little fuzzy, it made the song sound rougher. You could probably replace those notes with something a little cleaner. Otherwise, The song sounded really good.

MDJ182000 responds:

Much thanks.

I kinda felt the same about the bass. I'll also take the repetitive nature into mind. I might have made it too long.

Thanks for listening and the constructive criticism

[Unforgivable.]

really cool

this song has a really cool beat and i feel like, if you replaced the orchestral sounding staccatos that cover the entire sound with something a little more modern, it would sound really cool.
Some of the piano staccatos closer to the end were a little weird sounding. Cool ending though.
good job

[Really Me [Kaskrin] RAP]

very good

i think that some of the lyrics could use a little work. I felt like some of the ends of the sentences were a little misaligned. I admire that you thought up these lyrics. Also, the end sounded a little to sudden. Maybe you could d a little more with the music in the background. otherwise, very good job

Kaskrin responds:

yea i did this whole thing in one big take, yea the end i kinda couldn't think of a good ending :[ and i really didn't take too much time to change the background music... ill be sure to fix it up though, and thanks for the review