coporalbiscuits's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJ M21 - Freedom]

good

I especially liked the parts where there was a bit of a call and response going on between the base and the high synth. My advice to you is to make it a little less repetitive, because most of the song was the same thing (or atleast sounded that way).
One thing i did not much like about it was the very loud base hits throughout the song that sounded a little fuzzy, it made the song sound rougher. You could probably replace those notes with something a little cleaner. Otherwise, The song sounded really good.

MDJ182000 responds:

Much thanks.

I kinda felt the same about the bass. I'll also take the repetitive nature into mind. I might have made it too long.

Thanks for listening and the constructive criticism

[Unforgivable.]

really cool

this song has a really cool beat and i feel like, if you replaced the orchestral sounding staccatos that cover the entire sound with something a little more modern, it would sound really cool.
Some of the piano staccatos closer to the end were a little weird sounding. Cool ending though.
good job

[Really Me [Kaskrin] RAP]

very good

i think that some of the lyrics could use a little work. I felt like some of the ends of the sentences were a little misaligned. I admire that you thought up these lyrics. Also, the end sounded a little to sudden. Maybe you could d a little more with the music in the background. otherwise, very good job

Kaskrin responds:

yea i did this whole thing in one big take, yea the end i kinda couldn't think of a good ending :[ and i really didn't take too much time to change the background music... ill be sure to fix it up though, and thanks for the review