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Score: 10
Plazma Burst: FTP

"awesome game!"

submission: Plazma Burst: FTP
date: June 25, 2009

probably the best game i have ever played on newgrounds. The graphics and shooting was amazing. the only problem with it was that it ran slow at times. Besides that, there is not much else to say. this game has been horribly underrated by newgrounds.

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Score: 0
The Dangers of Music

"This aint Nathaniel Milburn!"

date: June 6, 2009

Seriously? Camp North? wtf? Why bother putting the name of another cartoon on your animation. Judging by your style, you are not nathaniel milburn so...explain?

June 7, 2009

Author's Response:

CampNorth isn't an animation, it's a community website for artists and animators. I used to be a member, before it shut down.

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Score: 2
Kill "The Man"

"To be honest..."

submission: Kill "The Man"
date: June 6, 2009

I really do not understand the pleasure in mercilessly slaughtering fat men. My range of pleaures does not include watching bitmaps exploding into violent bursts of gore, and I do not understand why someone would take time to create something as hyper-violent as this. The animation needed a little work, but a bit of practice should help (and try not to keep your favorite color red, please). I would greatly enjoy watching an animation that uses your growing talent on something other than violence.

Until then, a 2/10

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Score: 2
dick cover

"whoa guys what is wrong with you?"

submission: dick cover
date: June 4, 2009

the quality of this flash movie is exceedingly poor. the most complex animation it gets into is basically a bunch of motion square motion tweens flying past. most of the animation was choppy, especially at the part with the leaf flying past. learn to use the tools in flash a little bit better before you submit stuff to newgrounds. Especially the fill tool, which is extremely useful. otherwise, continue to work on artistic parts in it, like changing the grass so its not just a big green square...etc. good luck.

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Score: 6
Don't Smoke... Please?

"contrary to what other people said about it..."

date: April 11, 2009

I actually found the graphics a little choppy. The music was good. My advice is to either alter the FPS or do something to make the graphics a bit smoother. I also felt that you could probably do a little more with this animation. Especially the cigarette, i think that, you could probably add a little smoke drifting up and maybe flickering the glow of it a bit too. My favorite part of all though was that you made the person in shadows. Very good job!

April 11, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! I will keep that in mind on future stuff!

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Score: 5
fight_or_die

"thank god i know spanish!"

submission: fight_or_die
date: April 10, 2009

The animation was well done, and the action was very good. It lacks a storyline though and that is the main problem with it.
also, i would recommend adding English subtitles. otherwise, good job

April 10, 2009

Author's Response:

you're right :)

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Score: 1
Motion Maze

"somehow, i don't get it..."

submission: Motion Maze
date: April 10, 2009

basically, if you move the box within an inch of the moving object, you lose. That glitch makes this game so pointless. I would suggest putting in a background so that it would be a little it more appealing. Please fix the glitches! also, phsycofrog is wrong that it is an AI. I am guessing it is just a motion tween moving around the stage with a collision detector. my advice is to put a lot more work into your games before you submit them.

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Score: 2
MC_new challenge(test) ß

"hmmmmmm"

date: April 8, 2009

it looks like it could be good, but everything that was happening just disappeared halfway through.perhaps you could add a little more movement of each person. like shaking or something.

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Score: 2
[LoD] pwnt noobington!!!!

"almost gave me a seizure!"

date: April 7, 2009

I think that i might not be getting the point of this movie. I will rate it on how i understand it. this flash has no story line at all. the beginning had over 30 seconds of just nazis marching. after that, it was pretty much just a bunch of flashing lights. My advice is to create a story line, and maybe animate the body of that person talking instead of just the mouth. This could definitely use a lot of work

April 7, 2009

Author's Response:

bodies don't talk

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Score: 3
Cops pt 1

"Needs a lot of work"

submission: Cops pt 1
date: April 6, 2009

First of all, there was a dripping sound behind the bad voice acting and the sound of the microphone being handled. Also, the animation was smooth but there was
(quote from the reviewer below me) "boxy shit" behind it all. work on the voices so that they don't all sound the same.

April 7, 2009

Author's Response:

The fact is that I didnt make it choppy myself. It was a laptop mic and camstudio was being an ass. It changed the avi to flash and it ended up like that. I didnt know it would become choppy till i played it in newgrounds...If you want a better view go to youtube then look up the user dangerdantheone and look at cops 1 and 2. Again, it wasn't my fault..first video..give me a break.

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