coporalbiscuits's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Dangers of Music]

This aint Nathaniel Milburn!

Seriously? Camp North? wtf? Why bother putting the name of another cartoon on your animation. Judging by your style, you are not nathaniel milburn so...explain?

Insanimation responds:

CampNorth isn't an animation, it's a community website for artists and animators. I used to be a member, before it shut down.

[Don't Smoke... Please?]

contrary to what other people said about it...

I actually found the graphics a little choppy. The music was good. My advice is to either alter the FPS or do something to make the graphics a bit smoother. I also felt that you could probably do a little more with this animation. Especially the cigarette, i think that, you could probably add a little smoke drifting up and maybe flickering the glow of it a bit too. My favorite part of all though was that you made the person in shadows. Very good job!

StupidGir responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I will keep that in mind on future stuff!

[fight_or_die]

thank god i know spanish!

The animation was well done, and the action was very good. It lacks a storyline though and that is the main problem with it.
also, i would recommend adding English subtitles. otherwise, good job

shiguy-master responds:

you're right :)

[[LoD] pwnt noobington!!!!]

almost gave me a seizure!

I think that i might not be getting the point of this movie. I will rate it on how i understand it. this flash has no story line at all. the beginning had over 30 seconds of just nazis marching. after that, it was pretty much just a bunch of flashing lights. My advice is to create a story line, and maybe animate the body of that person talking instead of just the mouth. This could definitely use a lot of work

LordZeebmork responds:

bodies don't talk

[Cops pt 1]

Needs a lot of work

First of all, there was a dripping sound behind the bad voice acting and the sound of the microphone being handled. Also, the animation was smooth but there was
(quote from the reviewer below me) "boxy shit" behind it all. work on the voices so that they don't all sound the same.

legendarydangerdan responds:

The fact is that I didnt make it choppy myself. It was a laptop mic and camstudio was being an ass. It changed the avi to flash and it ended up like that. I didnt know it would become choppy till i played it in newgrounds...If you want a better view go to youtube then look up the user dangerdantheone and look at cops 1 and 2. Again, it wasn't my fault..first video..give me a break.

[Brainfeeder]

good

the best part of this movie was the style that you used. When there was animation, it was done well and the music/background noise could have been a little better quality, unless that was what you wanted. good job

Rutger responds:

Thanks man. I wanted the audio to be like that, the song itself is already actually.